Fantaisy world online I : New Roads

Fantaisy world online I : New Roads

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KarineMazouzi By KarineMazouzi Completed

Ben is a 22 years old single office worker living with his university student sister. His favorite thing in the world are mmorpg's. When RetroGame lunchs the first Virtual Reality mmorpg, he is one of the lucky ones selected to receive the Golden pack. Ben sets himself to become the Emperor of New Roads! Follow him as he tarts his aventure from scratch and builds his legend.  
A science fiction fantaisy adventure story with a bit of humor, romence, action and a lot of crasy happenings and twists!

  • beastmen
  • dwarf
  • elfe
  • emperor
  • fantasy
  • game
  • games
  • knight
  • lord
  • magic
  • new
  • priest
  • sword
  • swords
  • vampire
  • virtual
  • werewolf
Breif-> brief, carring-> carrying, reache-> reach, Gollem-> Golem, bravour-> bravery
johnny1134 johnny1134 2 days ago
I am pretty sure she is an European from a country like Germany or something, so just asking, do you know how to write a story in another language?
Lorddancer Lorddancer Apr 26
you need to clarify. is the gnoll wielding the rusty sword or the player? so either you could switch "a rusty curved sword" to "with its rusty curved sword" or "the player who has a rusty curved sword"
meals from because I wanted to continue the once a year meals correction.
-tophie- -tophie- Jul 28
This is a very good story, containing an amazing plot. The only downside is the bad grammar, but still, if you learn to look past this flaws, you'll find this highly enjoyable.
Lorddancer Lorddancer Apr 26
some context is missing here. you need to clarify that it was getting close to x time or something. it really was confusing