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The alphas mate ****on hold****

The alphas mate ****on hold****

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Luna By tigergoesrwarr Updated Aug 12, 2016

My face became corrupt with anger and rage, I may be called evil but I'd never sexually abuse a woman, that's just low, fuck its lower than low. Justin told me what she told them, "well where is she now?" I asked "in one of the spare rooms." 
I got up as did Justin, leading me to the room. As soon as Justin opened the door to the room I smelled a sweet strawberry sent with a hint of pine hit me in the face like a sack of bricks, when I laid my eyes apon  the small girl laying in the bed the words slipped out of my mouth so quick I didn't even realize I said it "Mine!"

DJDonutDucky DJDonutDucky Oct 01, 2016
As a proud grammar Nazi I must inform you that your grammar and spelling  skills need therapy. It's a great story with not so great grammar.
tigergoesrwarr tigergoesrwarr May 02, 2015
@ErisedLebronVeloz omg thank you for the advice but I think I'm just going to finish it for now and then bring it all together but thank you :)
ErisedLebronVeloz ErisedLebronVeloz May 02, 2015
I start reading your book and I can tell that you are a good writer but if you can separate your long chapter into small chapter it would look more interesting and if you separate what the character says it will be better.