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Beneath Secrets (Anastasia's Story)

Beneath Secrets (Anastasia's Story)

4.1K Reads 62 Votes 7 Part Story
Dominique By MisticXMind Completed

Anastasia’s life around the castle, is very communal, her parents is not very initiate with her and her sister Annabelle, the only person she grew up with is her Nanny, her sister, and her aunt Dilley who past away years ago (May her soul rest in peace). One day around the Castle she heard a noise, but that’s not the only thing that changes her life completely. Many secrets would be reveled, and many hearts would be heartbroken.

xAdorableKittyx xAdorableKittyx May 30, 2013
It's intriguing and a mind teaser, however; I'm sorry to say you made a few spelling mistakes and I'll have to agree with @SavyJParker about dividing it up into paragraphs so it is easier to read. *Voted*
SavyJParker SavyJParker Mar 22, 2011
This seems pretty interesting. I would suggest that you separate some of the paragraphs though. Nice work.
IBreakHearts IBreakHearts Mar 20, 2011
This is really good but in the begining can you space"s all togetheir other then that everything is great..can't below im your first comment upload soon *voted* :)