My name is Violet Deyanne and I'm 16 in one week I'm happy and upset because what if my mate rejects me and yes I'm a werewolf but anyways no one knows what I'm capable of only me my wolf and my best friend Zoe Lynn
I love the beginning but I'm getting confused with both of them talking without at least separate paragraphs without the quotes
Anybody else thought of White Chicks no just me okay😎😎😎
Please go back and use quotation marks. I'm so confused and lost on what someone is saying vs thinking.
quotation marks PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE! ITS EXTREMELY CONFUSING WHEN THE READERS ARE TRYING TO FIGURE OUT WHO IS SAYING WHAT
you're an exceptional writer!
i hope you would edit this book.....
some readers would get dizzy about the conversation...
it's just a suggestion though ;)
You should really work on your grammar, punctuation, and spelling before you decide to upload your book.