His rejection my revenge

His rejection my revenge

80.6K Reads 2.1K Votes 24 Part Story
Kayla Laurane By dat_blue_lake_gal Completed

My name is Violet Deyanne and I'm 16 in one week I'm happy and upset because what if my mate rejects me and yes I'm a werewolf but anyways no one knows what I'm capable of only me my wolf and my best friend Zoe Lynn

TiaJenn TiaJenn May 04, 2016
I love the beginning but I'm getting confused with both of them talking without at least separate paragraphs without the quotes
amberkarate amberkarate Oct 21, 2016
Anybody else thought of White Chicks no just me okay😎😎😎
JessBaker216 JessBaker216 Apr 15, 2016
Please go back and use quotation marks. I'm so confused and lost on what someone is saying vs  thinking.
junior2901445 junior2901445 Jun 29, 2016
quotation marks PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE! ITS EXTREMELY CONFUSING WHEN THE READERS ARE TRYING TO FIGURE OUT WHO IS SAYING WHAT
demgracer demgracer Oct 03, 2016
you're an exceptional writer!
                              although..........
                              i hope you would edit this book.....
                              some readers would get dizzy about the conversation...
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                              it's just a suggestion though ;)
biinky23 biinky23 4 days ago
You should really work on your grammar, punctuation, and spelling before you decide to upload your book.