His rejection my revenge

His rejection my revenge

124K Reads 3.3K Votes 24 Part Story
Kayla Laurane By dat_blue_lake_gal Completed

My name is Violet Deyanne and I'm 16 in one week I'm happy and upset because what if my mate rejects me and yes I'm a werewolf but anyways no one knows what I'm capable of only me my wolf and my best friend Zoe Lynn

  • blake
  • completed
  • derrick
  • love
  • mate
  • reallydontcare
  • rejection
  • simone
  • singing
  • songs
  • together
  • violet
  • zoe
KittyKKatt16 KittyKKatt16 Dec 29, 2017
Plz indent and use quotations, this is really hard to follow
My head is aching at this book. No offence but there are punctuation for a certain reason.
alaznur alaznur Apr 22, 2017
Its okay. But could you please mark the dialogues with "" or — signs? It would make it easier to read
StephanieSmith193 StephanieSmith193 Mar 13, 2017
Let it keep popping in ur head becase so far it good reading
lulugaming3 lulugaming3 Feb 13
It's confusing please use "..." this to indicate they are talking
YukkiKurossu YukkiKurossu Sep 05, 2017
Please, use the quotation marks!!!😣
                              This looks promising, though...😀