His rejection my revenge

His rejection my revenge

73.6K Reads 2K Votes 24 Part Story
Kayla Laurane By dat_blue_lake_gal Completed

My name is Violet Deyanne and I'm 16 in one week I'm happy and upset because what if my mate rejects me and yes I'm a werewolf but anyways no one knows what I'm capable of only me my wolf and my best friend Zoe Lynn

TiaJenn TiaJenn May 04
I love the beginning but I'm getting confused with both of them talking without at least separate paragraphs without the quotes
amberkarate amberkarate Oct 21
Anybody else thought of White Chicks no just me okay😎😎😎
Please go back and use quotation marks. I'm so confused and lost on what someone is saying vs  thinking.
quotation marks PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE! ITS EXTREMELY CONFUSING WHEN THE READERS ARE TRYING TO FIGURE OUT WHO IS SAYING WHAT
demgracer demgracer Oct 03
you're an exceptional writer!
                              although..........
                              i hope you would edit this book.....
                              some readers would get dizzy about the conversation...
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                              it's just a suggestion though ;)
ThatOneGermanLesbian ThatOneGermanLesbian Oct 21, 2014
hello bud I added this to my library so anyways this is amazing I finished it on my other account and must I say its amazi again?