Rejected The Rare One ♥

Rejected The Rare One ♥

109K Reads 3.9K Votes 14 Part Story
rayanah By rayred2000 Updated Oct 02

My name is Blue but everybody calls me "runt" or "slave". My parents were killed when I was six I remember every thing about them though. My mom was a witch. My dad was a vampire. This is my story.

rayred2000 rayred2000 Apr 02
Thank you so much. Don't worry I accept constructive criticism.
I would've been yawning like "Are you done yet? Because I have chores so..."
Ltcaine1 Ltcaine1 Aug 28
She maybe an Omega! But you better look out! Se might get Her revenge! 😄 😄
Visualdiva Visualdiva Apr 01
Pls do not be offended. You might want to add a full stop after the word die. Also I think you meant to say 'rogues' right? :-)
it took me FIVE time to relize this was an awsome story i wish i  read it sooner😘😜😎
Visualdiva Visualdiva Apr 01
Punctuate full stop missing after die and I think you mean rogues?