My Possessive Mate

My Possessive Mate

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Its_Lani24 By Its_Lani24 Completed

It's hard to run away from an alpha, especially when he's your mate.

FIXING ERRORS AND MISSPELLING!

justagirl86 justagirl86 Apr 09
Dude you should've made this whole introduction into a book and made this the sequel I would've read it tbh
alsey89 alsey89 Feb 12
Just a bit more detail and perhaps cut the introduction. Let's find about her hourglass figure later, shall we? Otherwise it's alright. This guy though... He's a psycho.
justagirl86 justagirl86 Apr 09
Wait is this like a after all this happen not like how it got there?
oh_hemmo oh_hemmo Jun 30
wait lockwood, as in tyler lockwood of the vampire diaries, cause if so i already love this book.
justagirl86 justagirl86 Apr 09
Okay fr not being rude but giving you some criticism having this at the beginning of your story kinda ruins the rest of it for me in a way
iamjoyceroa iamjoyceroa Jul 03
I'm not sure if he really killed your dad. Don't judge right away.