It's hard to run away from an alpha, especially when he's your mate.
FIXING ERRORS AND MISSPELLING!
Dude you should've made this whole introduction into a book and made this the sequel I would've read it tbh
Just a bit more detail and perhaps cut the introduction. Let's find about her hourglass figure later, shall we? Otherwise it's alright. This guy though... He's a psycho.
Wait is this like a after all this happen not like how it got there?
wait lockwood, as in tyler lockwood of the vampire diaries, cause if so i already love this book.
Okay fr not being rude but giving you some criticism having this at the beginning of your story kinda ruins the rest of it for me in a way
I'm not sure if he really killed your dad. Don't judge right away.