A series of poems in a 5-7-5 format taking a somewhat twisted look at nature and all its contents.
and interesting depth here in the images. The antithesis in the lines really works well in this poem.
@CalebPaul Do you like the word or the actual smell?
If it's the smell then you are a stranger being my friend...
@Warrior_Prophet They're awesome to do! All you have to do is create imagery which will make the reader think, and not reveal too much.
Basically follow this: The haiku that reveals seventy to eighty percent of its subject is good. Those that reveal fifty to sixty percent, we never tire of.
awesome haiku! i will have to have a go!
ps. congratulations on the worlds shortest poem! i've never heard of these before last week!