Mother Nature's Dreams

Mother Nature's Dreams

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ElizaLee By ElizaLee Updated Aug 09, 2011

A series of poems in a 5-7-5 format taking a somewhat twisted look at nature and all its contents.

  • beauty
  • death
  • disaster
  • end
  • freedom
  • gone
  • happy
  • leaves
  • losing
  • nature
  • oppression
  • rain
  • rainbow
  • ruined
  • sad
  • sea
  • summer
  • sun
  • unnoticed
  • wet
RhPeat RhPeat Aug 10, 2011
and interesting depth here in the images. The antithesis in the lines really works well in this poem.
ElizaLee ElizaLee Mar 24, 2011
@CalebPaul Do you like the word or the actual smell?
                              
                              If it's the smell then you are a stranger being my friend...
ElizaLee ElizaLee Mar 20, 2011
@Warrior_Prophet They're awesome to do! All you have to do is create imagery which will make the reader think, and not reveal too much.
                              
                              Basically follow this: The haiku that reveals seventy to eighty percent of its subject is good. Those that reveal fifty to sixty percent, we never tire of.
Warrior_Prophet Warrior_Prophet Mar 20, 2011
awesome haiku! i will have to have a go! 
                              ps. congratulations on the worlds shortest poem! i've never heard of these before last week!