Mother Nature's Dreams

Mother Nature's Dreams

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ElizaLee By ElizaLee Updated Aug 09, 2011

A series of poems in a 5-7-5 format taking a somewhat twisted look at nature and all its contents.

RhPeat RhPeat Aug 10, 2011
and interesting depth here in the images. The antithesis in the lines really works well in this poem.
ElizaLee ElizaLee Mar 24, 2011
@CalebPaul Do you like the word or the actual smell?
                              
                              If it's the smell then you are a stranger being my friend...
ElizaLee ElizaLee Mar 20, 2011
@Warrior_Prophet They're awesome to do! All you have to do is create imagery which will make the reader think, and not reveal too much.
                              
                              Basically follow this: The haiku that reveals seventy to eighty percent of its subject is good. Those that reveal fifty to sixty percent, we never tire of.
Warrior_Prophet Warrior_Prophet Mar 20, 2011
awesome haiku! i will have to have a go! 
                              ps. congratulations on the worlds shortest poem! i've never heard of these before last week!