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The Prince's Girl (On Hold)

The Prince's Girl (On Hold)

6.6K Reads 103 Votes 11 Part Story
fictionbliss By fictionbliss Updated Oct 30, 2011

Jennifer and her family just arrived town when rumors about The Prince's Girl went viral. Everyone wants to know who made The Prince  fall in love. But Jennifer was much too distracted by the rich and handsome Bryan to care about those rumors. But what happens when she finds out who The Prince really is? Will she accept the truth about The Prince's Girl? Find out. ;)

yuphawadikhamlue16 yuphawadikhamlue16 Nov 02, 2015
Isn't the front cover a picture from a Thai movie?? But anyways I love your book already
Sylphine Sylphine Aug 27, 2011
Im in love with your story, and this is just the first chapter!! Its unique, and Im completely hooked. Gotta love romances :D
RimUranium RimUranium Jun 05, 2011
Ooh this sounds very interesting <3 he sounds very mysterious and interesting!
                              Good start to the story <3 voted
xxdrkluvxx xxdrkluvxx May 07, 2011
a little more description and using more fun loving words would be a good idea and making the summary a little more mysterious would be awesome you kind of gave it away.
Ubiquitous-Kiss Ubiquitous-Kiss Apr 10, 2011
Hmm, this could use a few more descriptions and a bit of editing.  This isn't really my type of story.  But anyways, with a bit more descriptions this could be a really good first chapter and the characters you've introduced seem like they'd be cool.
KellieB123 KellieB123 Apr 10, 2011
Interesting....good writing! Can't wait to see what happens next. Darn those cupcakes! LOL.