Changes Of The Night

Changes Of The Night

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Claudia By Soulesscause Updated Feb 11, 2012

For seventeen hailey north she hates being a halfbreed half human half wolf all she wants is to be like the rest haven kids while her twin brother is a purbred who also changed like the rest at the very age of fourteen but what will happen if she begins to change will she be strong or will her human blood weaky her and what will happen when her ex bestfriend the towns badboy and future alpha starts to show an interest in her how long will this secret last before it breaks free

foxifae foxifae Jun 13, 2011
Hi, it's very difficult to read a story that has no punctuation, however good. Why don't you ask one of the nice wattpad editors to give you a hand. Then I'm sure your story will do really well. xx
Soulesscause Soulesscause May 30, 2011
@Surf1996Girl yea i need to edited it abit still thnxs and im reading ur story right nw
dialupthesun dialupthesun May 30, 2011
Really good again =]
                              Maybe capitalise your sentences, for example ''"good morning son would u like something to eat'' as dad started...'' should be ''''Good morning son, would you like something to eat?'' As Dad started...''
                               
Soulesscause Soulesscause May 30, 2011
@AphroditeKid thnxs you so much this really means alot to me :)