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The Criminal | Illicit Desires #1

The Criminal | Illicit Desires #1

8.6M Reads 131K Votes 17 Part Story
Taco_Army By JaysArmy Updated Jun 20

Running from the captivity, of an unrelenting sinister past, Lacy Summers falls prey to the fierce and mysterious forces of an ex-con, Johann Silvetti. Unable to control her obsessive lust, she's thrust into a world of pure carnal sin. As the addiction becomes dangerously intoxicating, she finds herself battling between; fighting for freedom and surrendering to her desires.

tazzsolo tazzsolo Jun 20
😂😂😂 I thought from her previous statement she'd be able to fix it....she crazy
tazzsolo tazzsolo Jun 20
Oh my word I'm not even the author but I'm getting annoyed hearing the same thing over
MottyB MottyB Jun 11
Not to be rude or anything but when you change POV could you give some indication. It's kinda hard to keep up with the story when the POV changes so suddenly, maybe put some asterisks? Other than that this story is amazing so far ☺️
awesomekidwrites awesomekidwrites 2 days ago
wait hold my popcorn, i need to talk to this bitch first and tell him one or two things to learn
You might want to consider putting a bigger indention between the paragraphs you switch to different point of views
AliciaCSE AliciaCSE Jun 18
Woah the change is kinda confusing... Maybe have a line in between or POV change thing? (Just a comment/constructive feedback please let no one get triggered)