The Criminal | Illicit Desires #1

The Criminal | Illicit Desires #1

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Running from the captivity, of an unrelenting sinister past, Lacy Summers falls prey to the fierce and mysterious forces of an ex-con, Johann Silvetti. Unable to control her obsessive lust, she's thrust into a world of pure carnal sin. As the addiction becomes dangerously intoxicating, she finds herself battling between; fighting for freedom and surrendering to her desires.

  • bad
  • dark
  • domination
  • forbidden
  • hot
  • intense
  • pleasure
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I really like the Lizzie Maguire type visual in my head right now lol
sumyum43 sumyum43 Mar 08
Did anyone else thunk of Lizzie McGuire after the last sentence with her subconscious
jeez it's so nice to read a well written book once in a while on wattpad.
I spend 2 minutes in the shower, and my mom starts screaming at me that I take to long and that I took an hour, how does thAT EVEN MAKE SENSE?
VioletSun5 VioletSun5 Feb 27
This just floated across my dash and it looks like you have a few misplaced commas. The use of 'rurally' as an adjective also doesn't really make sense here because that would refer to the countryside, which skyscrapers are not. There's probably a better way to convey this?
There really should have been like some sort of ** or something indicate the change