Moksha (Attys)

Moksha (Attys)

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Percikingdawn By Percikingdawn Completed

"I am so happy cause today I found my friends, they are in my head."-Kurt Cobain

    Censored_Innocence Censored_Innocence Aug 27, 2012
    u call it sonnet.... 'n I cal myself not a poet..... 'm i wrong if i say it exceeds wit 2 xtra lines?
    Censored_Innocence Censored_Innocence Aug 27, 2012
    This one is really good... sestet couplet z nt a cup of my tea
    Prisim Prisim Aug 12, 2012
    I wish I knew poetry better to help you for the Atty's. But I just don't read it enough to be able to offer you any solid advice :(
    Percikingdawn Percikingdawn Aug 12, 2012
    @Ophelia_bumps yeah, I was having some trouble with it, this is not final though, even poems require a little bit of editing. :p
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