Moksha (Attys)

Moksha (Attys)

10 Part Story 369 Reads 19 Votes
Percikingdawn By Percikingdawn Completed

"I am so happy cause today I found my friends, they are in my head."-Kurt Cobain

u call it sonnet.... 'n I cal myself not a poet..... 'm i wrong if i say it exceeds wit 2 xtra lines?
This one is really good... sestet couplet z nt a cup of my tea
Prisim Prisim Aug 12, 2012 04:44PM
I wish I knew poetry better to help you for the Atty's. But I just don't read it enough to be able to offer you any solid advice :(
Percikingdawn Percikingdawn Aug 12, 2012 05:55AM
@Ophelia_bumps yeah, I was having some trouble with it, this is not final though, even poems require a little bit of editing. :p
                              Glad you liked it.