Vengeance, Be Mine (Wattys 2014)

Vengeance, Be Mine (Wattys 2014)

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ValeriBeatrix By ValeriBeatrix Completed

****#276 in Mystery/Thriller****

Flowers by day, murders by night. This is Mia Ozu's deadly secret. 

Haunted by the vicious murder of her parents, Mia spent a lifetime hunting down anyone involved. But revenge is never as sweet as it seems and when one murder reveals a shocking betrayal and threatens to expose her true nature, she must decide if finding the truth is worth the risk.

***A/N: I'd like to make this a novel and need feedback on what can be added. Thanks a bunch!

xhizcaah xhizcaah Nov 26, 2016
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YoursTrulyMe YoursTrulyMe Sep 28, 2016
Wait! But isn't her character Mila J? I wouldn't look at Mila J and think "oh this is a black girl, she's totally not Asian at all." Love the diversity but maybe you should rethink the cast 😁
LoudChild LoudChild Oct 05, 2016
I think you meant to put reps :) (sorry not trying to be rude just letting you know about the typo)
Very nice Miss Author. I love the characters so far, and the story idea is cool. Your style and usage shows that you've had some years of practice, which is nice. I think the story is going too fast for my taste, but that's just my opinion.
ValeriBeatrix ValeriBeatrix Mar 05, 2016
That would be a really good twist!!!! I have to keep that in mind
ammaa123 ammaa123 Nov 27, 2016
I can't even do 1 push up right nonetheless 50 of them. Helllllll nahhhhh