When Amy finds a mysterious bracelet strange things begin to happen. But when her brother starts acting suspisous Amy knows something is going on, not only that, she begins so see strange visions in her dreams, could this all mean something?
Wow, you're a master at first-person narrative O_O that's bloody awesome. I didn't find a single flaw! You need to teach me D: WRITE MOARRRRRRR!
This is amazing!!!! :D haha!! It's an awesome opening!! And kinda sad. But that's going to make for a great story! :D be sure to msg me when you upload!! :D Thanks!
I'm about halfway through chapter one right now.
Wow, this is brilliant! I cant wait for you to write some more of it!