Bar Room Angel

Bar Room Angel

19.1K Reads 730 Votes 28 Part Story
Lou By LouMoran Updated Mar 01

A night out leaves Bella terrified at the hands of a predator. The devil will try to make her pay for daring to turn him down, while an angel will capture her heart in ways she never imagined. All Human BxE, Rated R for language/lemons/some violence.

Lol...flapped like a fish!!!! I can almost see his surprised face
I've started my reading as I promised! And I'm glad...I can't wait to seen what's next! !! Congrats dear!!!♥♥♥
LisaGilpin LisaGilpin Aug 26, 2015
Well that was interesting, intriguing, and utterly enjoyable. Love the flip in POV's.  Really gives readers the whole picture and I prefer to write this way too.  Loving the humour, and imo the southern US drawl. You've got this nailed already huni, I'm sold! 
                              
                              Bring it on...chapter 2 awaits xx ;))
ScarletteDrake ScarletteDrake Jun 02, 2015
Lauren I mean! My comment popped up on the wrong part for some reason! Which is why I never put inline comments!!