Bar Room Angel

Bar Room Angel

28.7K Reads 1K Votes 28 Part Story
Lou By LouMoran Updated Mar 01, 2016

A night out leaves Bella terrified at the hands of a predator. The devil will try to make her pay for daring to turn him down, while an angel will capture her heart in ways she never imagined. All Human BxE, Rated R for language/lemons/some violence.

Aishjw Aishjw Jun 10
Soooooo, her name is Bella Swan.........
                              Like from Twilight, this isn't a fanfiction is it?
jetblack13 jetblack13 Jan 31
Hehehhe the names are very inspired by twilight but that's ok there good names
MollyRomero8 MollyRomero8 Jan 07, 2016
I've started my reading as I promised! And I'm glad...I can't wait to seen what's next! !! Congrats dear!!!♥♥♥
LisaGilpin LisaGilpin Aug 26, 2015
Well that was interesting, intriguing, and utterly enjoyable. Love the flip in POV's.  Really gives readers the whole picture and I prefer to write this way too.  Loving the humour, and imo the southern US drawl. You've got this nailed already huni, I'm sold! 
                              
                              Bring it on...chapter 2 awaits xx ;))
ScarletteDrake ScarletteDrake Jun 02, 2015
Lauren I mean! My comment popped up on the wrong part for some reason! Which is why I never put inline comments!!