The Lost

The Lost

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Barney... why not By thebreathdies Updated Jun 13, 2011

I see the beach. I see her face. Never have I felt so lost and alone. She needs me... she really does. I can't let her get hurt. Have you ever loved. Truly love. But know you will die. He's going to hurt her. He's going to hurt me. But I can change it. But if I do she dies. I feel so lost in the dream. The dream of death.

smurf110 smurf110 Apr 13, 2011
The story starts of with a lot of kissing ha ha ha 
                              The title of the book is Half-Light by Death something wait
                              
smurf110 smurf110 Apr 13, 2011
I have recommended it to one person so far their story is really good read it is my lybery I forgot what it is called
smurf110 smurf110 Apr 13, 2011
The story is really good upload more I voted and read it and I am going to recommend it  to some random people so you get more reads
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                              Also did you write the doll because I typed thebreathdies in the search box and apparently you wrote it just interested
                              
CaramelBunny CaramelBunny Mar 20, 2011
@thebreathdies ure welcome. Yea i read it this sounds like a really good storyXD. Oh and ure welcome :) i was excited too;p
thebreathdies thebreathdies Mar 20, 2011
@CaramelBunny Thanks. I have written one now. Thanks for being the first one to comment!!!! ;-) :-D
CaramelBunny CaramelBunny Mar 20, 2011
Oh ps u should write one of hose things that tells wat the stories gonna be about..