Who's to Blame?

Who's to Blame?

968 Reads 29 Votes 10 Part Story
Neha By NabobTomlinson Updated Feb 27, 2013

A girl just about to turn 19 is suffering through a summer in Maui without her friends. Just a little taste of the next year, when she is doing her much needed victory lap. She meets a boy her age and they hit it off. Weird things happen, her life changes, and she realizes that true love can beat all in the end.

  • blame
  • blood
  • children
  • crime
  • gore
  • horror
  • kidnapping
  • marriage
  • murder
  • pregnency
  • romance
  • suspence
  • teenager
  • tennagers
  • unplanned
  • whos
NabobTomlinson NabobTomlinson Apr 02, 2011
@xxQueeNxx lol thanks. its one of my favourite girl names :)
xxMusicMyLifexx xxMusicMyLifexx Mar 21, 2011
This is really good! i like how Roxy is no self conciouse about what she does in her room.
NabobTomlinson NabobTomlinson Dec 29, 2010
@LunaChild lol thanks :) I really just type what I think, and me switching tenses is pretty normal for me...i usually get my rents to read over my work, but you can see how i cant do that for this story...
NabobTomlinson NabobTomlinson Nov 15, 2010
@GlassxAngel lol thanks :P and i have a question...how do u add people so u can chat with them? do u just become a fan of them?
NabobTomlinson NabobTomlinson Nov 15, 2010
@GlassxAngel Thanks so much for your feedback! This is just a random write too! I was really bored in the summer, so I just started to write, and it turned into a hit =P Let me know how you like the rest of it...it get's very different...
                              I hope you like the rest of it =)