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Sinful Pleasure (SLOW UPDATES)

Sinful Pleasure (SLOW UPDATES)

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treyonna-monae By treyonna-monae Updated Jun 14

Being overtaken by vampires and turned into slaves was life-changing, but for Ellanore, being sold to Raphael Petrovic was definitely life-changing. She's use to moving from home to home, but moving into a house with two brothers who both seem to take interest in her was the highest point on the scale of weird. Did I forget to mention that they're vampires, excluding Ellanore. . . Well they are and being stuck between two strong, determined vampires is not how Ellanore expected her stay at the Petrovic's to be, and she definitely didn't expect to fall for one. Having her mind over powered with the thought of leaving and staying Ellanore tries to figure out what she wants without causing any problems. But if you throw in some drama, lies, and delusional girls then someone's bound to get hurt in the end.

I really like this. The description is awesome and the plot holds a lot of promise for a super interesting story, with lots to come. I also like your M/C and their voice, it makes the whole thing very readable!
girl_whobreaths_fire girl_whobreaths_fire Oct 05, 2016
Whoa! I was actually thinking of Nina, Ian and Paul while reading the synopsis.
shy_facade shy_facade Oct 29, 2016
                              This chapter literally pulled me into your book. I couldn't stop reading.(I had to force myself to stop and comment) Your writing is really mesmerising. The description was so good that my brain pictured everything perfectly.
HayleyCrimson HayleyCrimson Oct 26, 2016
 #EtherealProject I love this! This is amazing, I love your details. It's really a riveting plot so far,  the beginning just pulled me in right away.
August_Blue August_Blue Oct 29, 2016
                              The descriptions are amazing, you have a way with words that pulls us into the narrator's world, which is really effective in a writer. Solid start so far!
bethani- bethani- Oct 26, 2016
I really like the idea of your book! However, it could do with being checked over for small things like changes in tense and minor grammar/punctuation problems :) But you do have strong characters and a good plot line!