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I couldn't be serious with Uriah being a leader. I would be laughing half the time.
Okay 1) Marlene will make a good leader
And 2) who in there right minds would put uriah in charge
could you read mine? its my first fanfic and the chapter's short because i wanted to see how many people would read it.
I like the story. I think what u should do is make it so that they get married and have kids because in every story I've read there is always some problem or enemy in there way. They deserve better than that.
i like it. so stories get straight into the romance as if there is nothing else to do with them, but your story eases into it which is nice.