Kelly Was Here (editing)

Kelly Was Here (editing)

151K Reads 8.4K Votes 43 Part Story
Raquel By sorchared Completed

[Wattpad Featured Story]
In the pleasant Town of Bedford, an old woman created herself a secret, a twisted and depraved way to get what she wanted. 
Kelly Anderson, a sweet girl with a wonderful family, seemed to be her latest prize in this perverse scheme. Trapped in a house of horrors, Kelly finds herself stuck with three other prisoners: a small boy, a strange girl, and a teenage boy that might just be her salvation or her downfall. 

Will Kelly's dad, the Chief of Police, finally string the clues together and find her? Or, will she be the next victim to fade away forever?  Will she remain sane and never lose hope? What do her captors want from her? 
Go see for yourself who survives in the House that evil built.

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Featured Story (10/08/2017) 
Highest Rank #7 (20/08/2017)
Inspired by an episode of criminal minds

  • action
  • completed
  • dark
  • darkromance
  • drama
  • family
  • fear
  • featured
  • friendship
  • kidnap
  • lies
  • love
  • mystery
  • prisoner
  • sad
  • secrets
  • strength
  • suspense
  • victim
I was scrolling through the search, and I see my name on a book cover. Kelly. And now I'm hooked!
Your grammar is- if this chapter is to judge- probably better than a lot of books I've read, even when the writers first language is English. Good job.
IAmAmused IAmAmused Aug 19
Why is it that people whose first language isn't English are so much better at English? I mean, it doesn't happen all the time, but whenever someone says "bare with me, English isn't my first language", it has some of the best grammar on wattpad.
It seems to me that the majority of people who say that English isn't their first language has better grammar than people who English is their first language. Example a- it took me like 3 minutes to write that one comment because I kept messing up the grammar.
Apple_Ally Apple_Ally Aug 19
My friend Kelly is at a cottage rn and the description fits mostly what is happening to her rn
This book was so amazing!! I found the characters amusing and the writing awesome! The author is SO creative!