When you have nothing to live for, what happens when you get thrown into the world of the immortal?
Please don't look at this as just another Vampire story, I think this is unique compared to others. You'll realize once you have read one chapter.
I like the premise, but you do have some grammar errors. You may need to review verb tenses. A good editor could show you. Most importantly, keep going on this story because you're on to something.
Just started. The description got me :p and I like what I read so far. :)
Holy crap! This is just the first chapter and I want to read more! Awesome first chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!
I've been reading this on my phone and I finally logged onto my actual account to say... HOLY SHIT THIS STORY IS BRILLIANT.
Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed it. I hope you enjoy the rest of it too if you decide to read it :)
@obsidianbutterfly13 YOU AGAIN!!! LOL
@Roisin I agree with the wanker above ^^^ (see that sis..I'm picking up on your slang lol) anyways I've absolutely never read such a beginning. Great Job I can already tell its going to be good.