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The Boy In The Girls' Locker Room [ON HIATUS]

The Boy In The Girls' Locker Room [ON HIATUS]

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victoria ღ By nostalgic_ Updated Jun 14, 2011

Katie Sanders, a beautiful girl with a tough life, that hides behind a shield. She's afraid to trust anyone and she's afraid to get to close anyone, but the one person that is always there is her best friend is Austin. Austin Marks has been there for her throught thick and thin. They've known each other since the age of six. Austin is the closest thing Katie has to family. 
   Katie may look normal on the outside, but in the inside she's lifeless. She's numb, and the one person she blames for it is her father. Her father has always been there, but not in the way she wants. He's taught her that she's nothing and that she will always be nothing. 
   But what happens when she gets stuck in the girls' locker room with Austin's best guy friend Damon. There's something you should know about Damon though, he's been in enough pain that'll last him a lifetime. What will happen when they're thrusted in each others lives? Will Katie be able to ignore him? Will they become friends? Will Katie let another person in or will she push him away when he wants to get to know her? What might happen when Damon fins out her secret?
   Follow Katie, Austin, and Damon through their high school lives and see if Katie really does find a person that makes her feel that she's worth something or will she let her fear overcome her life?

selenoxphile selenoxphile Mar 19, 2011
This is a good start but it helps a lot if you describe things in detail a little more. Some things were rushed, but over all it was good. Only a few mistakes. <3 Let me know if you want an editor. I'll be more than glad to help!<33