Generation X

Generation X

1.8K Reads 102 Votes 6 Part Story
CyberPunks By CyberPunks Updated Nov 23, 2012

The Corporation has created powerful weapons. Genetically-enhanced children, in fact. But when a group of children escapes from their prison, they find that their involvement in the world may be bigger then they realized. In a world of hovercrafts, acid rain and orange skies, will they even live as normal children--or was their destiny really to be assassins?

ChatterKid ChatterKid Aug 09, 2012
Science fiction is always very interesting for me, mainly because I suck ata writing it. You've built up a brilliant new world though and it's very intriguing how you've written it. I like how you say 'she' for the chapter as well, not giving a name makes it seem very mysterious. Good work!
etthealien etthealien Aug 04, 2012
This is so amazing! I really loved every part of this chapter, it was totally captivating. I love your writing style, and your characters and description are fantastic! I'll definitely be reading on! :D Voted!
CyberPunks CyberPunks Aug 03, 2012
@LuckiCharmz Whoa, thanks! (: Hope you'd give us more feedback when we get more chapters out (: Thanks again (:
CyberPunks CyberPunks Aug 03, 2012
@AvengerIAm Ooh, sorry <_< Anyway, hope you'd really read on and still tell us what you think about it (:
CyberPunks CyberPunks Aug 03, 2012
@AvengerIAm Um, I don't think you read the chapter through-- it says at the end of the chappie that she drops the child. Anyway, thanks for the support (:
alem0007 alem0007 Aug 03, 2012
I'm impressed. This is very entertaining and full of action, eh? This is a movie material if you'll ask me and has a great story line. I love your way of details. you stimulated my imaginative mind by the description you provided and I'm awestruck.. :D definitely adding to my RL. and VOTED :D