Little Red Riding Hood

Little Red Riding Hood

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FrozenLungsCanBreath By FrozenLungsCanBreath Updated Oct 18

Little Red Riding Hood...ever heard of her? Maybe you have but I'm sure you don't realize the stories you've been told, are wrong. You think that Little Red Riding Hood was either killed, ran away, got locked in the closet, or some other crazy idea.  You might have been told that she was on her way to her grandmother's home with some baked goods, that part of the story is true.

  But that's the only part of it that is true, the whole thing about her dieing because of the wolf or getting thrown into a closet isn't true.  It's all lies what you've been told; she didn't die, she was badly hurt then taken through a portal to another world....

  This is a story about Red Riding Hood, the true story.
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COVER CREATED BY @EnjxiiBlxck
Please give this book a chance, I know the prologue seems weirdly worded but if you give it a try you won't be let down.  Also don't copy my work, I work hard on every page I write out.  Have a nice day my little Snowflakes/Winterrites.

Above her knees? Im sorry, but during that time period her skirt would of have to reach the floor at least, it was considered extremely improper for a female to have any part of her legs visible
GreeWolLunaWarrior GreeWolLunaWarrior Aug 19, 2014
Mmmhhhmmm as i predicted.
                              
                              this story is good i already want to read more.
                              
                              There are very few spelling mistakes which is very good and i also like the twost.
                              
                              Awwww poor winter, it's really sad and painful to lose sbd that is very close to you
AquaMelodi AquaMelodi Jul 19, 2014
I honestly love the name Winter! :)
                              I like your style of writing it's very mature i also did see a few grammar mistakes but that's nothing you can;t fix.
TheBlueCaterpillar TheBlueCaterpillar Jul 01, 2014
I think this story is great! They had longer dresses, but except from that I relay think your writing is wonderful.
Seyvn_19 Seyvn_19 Jun 29, 2014
Alright, constructive criticism. ..
                              
                              some of the things your wrote in your story are very good, but the wording is off. What I would recommend is re-reading your story, and pointing out things that just dont make that much sense. 
                              
                              Other than that, the story was very good! Keep up the good work!,
Emma_Wolf11 Emma_Wolf11 Jun 28, 2014
Very good! It is written perfectly. I have never read writing like yours and it is good. Keep it up! I can't wait to read more