In Love with the Girl I Hate (NaLu)

In Love with the Girl I Hate (NaLu)

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Baka-Senpai By Baka-Senpai Updated Jul 23, 2014

Natsu a jock in Fairy Tail Academy is Falling for a Nerd. They both hate each other but Lucy needs to help Natsu with his grades.That's when things change. (NaLu)

paragraphs are too long and you should add some speach !but great so far....maybe less bakas???
Y u judge people cuz they're nerds? A certain nerd use their knowledge to invent your phone! Appreciate the nerds ok? Without them, you wouldn't have the luxurious life you live today
WAIT LASAGNA IS HERE BETTER CALL SOMEONE!! *GETS OTHER PHONE IMMIEADIATTLY* 
                              
                              
                              
                              Garfield: Hello?
                              
                              HELLO GARFIELD ARE U ALIVE I WILL COME TO UR HOUSE THIS MORNING AND FEED U A (DRAMA) DELISH LASAGNA!!
                              
                              
                              Me: Umm ok?
Baka in our language actually means cow...🐄🐄🐄
                              
                              Baka! Baka! Baka! *Cow! Cow! Cow!"
008lids 008lids Mar 20
It's an amazing story just add the quotation mark they are very important in writing you may want to add some brackets clauses and semi colons perhaps just to make your writing that little bit better.
Wait... GRAY? Oh hell to the no! And he called Lucy his, ENEMY? That's just harsh