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In Love with the Girl I Hate (NaLu)

In Love with the Girl I Hate (NaLu)

77.1K Reads 2.7K Votes 9 Part Story
Baka-Senpai By Baka-Senpai Updated Jul 23, 2014

Natsu a jock in Fairy Tail Academy is Falling for a Nerd. They both hate each other but Lucy needs to help Natsu with his grades.That's when things change. (NaLu)

Not to be rude. But if someone's talking you need to put quotation marks. Basically it would help if you used better punctuation.
Lux-Sylania Lux-Sylania Mar 25
I think that it was confusing because there was no quotations and paragraphs, sorry. I think that you need to improve a bit more, sorry.
MavisVermillion12 MavisVermillion12 Mar 31, 2016
paragraphs are too long and you should add some speach !but great so far....maybe less bakas???
Itsahustlesweetheart Itsahustlesweetheart Jul 14, 2016
Y u judge people cuz they're nerds? A certain nerd use their knowledge to invent your phone! Appreciate the nerds ok? Without them, you wouldn't have the luxurious life you live today
Mello_Akita_143 Mello_Akita_143 Sep 16, 2016
WAIT LASAGNA IS HERE BETTER CALL SOMEONE!! *GETS OTHER PHONE IMMIEADIATTLY* 
                              
                              
                              
                              Garfield: Hello?
                              
                              HELLO GARFIELD ARE U ALIVE I WILL COME TO UR HOUSE THIS MORNING AND FEED U A (DRAMA) DELISH LASAGNA!!
                              
                              
                              Me: Umm ok?
not to be rude or anything but punctuation please i'm really confused..