How many times will the love of your life die before you stop missing him?
@Pixie_Stixx @Smiley08 @WroughtTales Thank you guys so much ^_^ ill go back and look at the puncuation
Draws the reader in instantly! Well done, just a few punctuation issues I would look at but nothing that takes away from the story. Good work!
that si so sad but it has good mystery. keps you wanting to read more. its good.
Hehe I lurv it :3 it's intense and all like "read me!" please write on :)
This was awesome! I hope you write more in the very soon future!
Darling, this is pitiful! You should deffinetly be able to do soo much better then this! And you gave away nothing about what is going on!