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450 Reads 30 Votes 1 Part Story
Chymander By Chymander Updated Mar 19, 2011

How many times will the love of your life die before you stop missing him?

Chymander Chymander Jul 16, 2012
@Pixie_Stixx @Smiley08 @WroughtTales Thank you guys so much ^_^ ill go back and look at the puncuation
WroughtTales WroughtTales Jul 16, 2012
Draws the reader in instantly!  Well done, just a few punctuation issues I would look at but nothing that takes away from the story.  Good work!
Just_me22 Just_me22 Jul 16, 2012
that si so sad but it has good mystery. keps you wanting to read more. its good.
HeatherAshley HeatherAshley Aug 03, 2011
Hehe I lurv it :3 it's intense and all like "read me!" please write on :)
LeafstarofSkyclan LeafstarofSkyclan Jul 19, 2011
This was awesome! I hope you write more in the very soon future!
LeafstarofSkyclan LeafstarofSkyclan Jul 19, 2011
Darling, this is pitiful! You should deffinetly be able to do soo much better then this! And you gave away nothing about what is going on!