The Story Of Us

The Story Of Us

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Frankie By HunniePie_18 Updated Aug 22, 2013

The day I first met her I knew she was the one I was going to marry, have a family with and die with happy memorise. Hailey Jones was a new girl at West Junior High. She was beautiful. Ever single boy wanted to go out with her. She had the look, the beauty, the style, popularity and most of all the smartness! On the other hand Luke Carmichael was a rich, handsome boy you will ever meet! He had the girls, style, looks and most of all popularity, but he wasnt a player he was just normal. But as they grow nearer, everything starts to change........ This Is The Story Of Us........

TheHalfBloodPrincess TheHalfBloodPrincess Aug 11, 2012
Aww, Poor Hailey! 
                              Keep up the good work with your story! :) 
                              
                              TheHalfBloodPrincess x
TheHalfBloodPrincess TheHalfBloodPrincess Aug 11, 2012
Really good! 
                              The only thing I'd say is maybe add a little more detail in between lunch and classes because we want to get a feel for the place. 
                              But even so the story is fantastic! :) 
                              
                              TheHalfBloodPrincess x