3.8K Reads 130 Votes 25 Part Story
Ashleigh Elizabeth By Percypeetaluver Completed

Addilyn Cooper has a normal life. A life that consists of school, school, and more school. Everything changes when one day an unfamiliar face comes to her door. Join Addilyn and five other teenagers as they embark on a journey from the magical world of Soarana. A journey full of action, romance, and revenge.

*It is not edited, I will edit it soon*

*Cover credit goes to PerfectlyDestroyed*

  • fantasy
  • romace
Percypeetaluver Percypeetaluver Sep 21, 2012
@xxmajaine Thank you so much for your honest comment! I completely agree on all of your advice! Soarana was sort of my guinea pig out of all of my books, I have to admit I am not as proud of it as I am of some of my others. Thank you!
VeeGraphics VeeGraphics Aug 30, 2012
I love the name Soarana! Very pretty and exotic. Like I said before, you could really work on your description, but also your overall sentence structure, prose, and flow. But, this chapter is actually a lot better, though! I like this story and I'll keep reading! =D
Percypeetaluver Percypeetaluver Aug 30, 2012
@QueeneeDee Yes I agree it isnt the best start to the book. I started this book about two years ago when I was 13 then I wrote the rest pretty recently. That is why the beginning isnt te best. Thank for your honesty! When I edit the book I am planning on changing it up.