The Burning Sensation of the rain

The Burning Sensation of the rain

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Dom By Antharimar Completed

This is a poem I wrote about the winter and cold.

Antharimar Antharimar Jun 05, 2011
Thanks. I've revised it a little though from its original, 1-2 year old first draft.
                              Thank you though!
fizzySmilez fizzySmilez Jun 04, 2011
Very well writen...it's so deep! I could not look away off my computer till i finished the last line! ahahaa very good keep writing! O.O x3
Antharimar Antharimar May 31, 2011
@DONGeee Thanks! your comment mean a lot! I might actually add this to 'Nara of the Lost'... maybe...
                              Its sorta like what happened to a character that is going to appear later in the story. She, well, "turned" into a "reverse elemental", like Andrew. (read to find out.)
Antharimar Antharimar Apr 09, 2011
@little_rose: you're welcome. I have looked at some of your work and thought this resembled some of it.
                              @EasterBunny445: Yes... I LOVE OLD ENGLISH!!!!!
EasterBunny445 EasterBunny445 Mar 27, 2011
This is really good dom!!! I think its funny how you added some old english in there with "T'would".... That was weird XD
little_rose little_rose Mar 24, 2011
And >.< THANK YOU for the dedication im sorry i just go strait to the stories i didn't notice at first but that you soooo much ^.^ i sooooooo happy now!