a girl gets bullied with an unusual observer
thanks so much for reading,commenting and voting, I must admit that this was my first attempt at writing poetry, thanks soo much for all your responses x
first time i read a poem that rhyms and actually sounds good and sad at the same time....good job
I have to be honest, I'm not a fan of rhyming poetry, but your imagery is good. Voted.
I really like this poem! It's very unique and well written. I feel like it could even be a song :) I voted~