a leafy view

a leafy view

393 Reads 15 Votes 1 Part Story
tessa siaba fray By creativedreamer Completed

a girl gets bullied with an unusual observer

creativedreamer creativedreamer Mar 18, 2011
 thanks so much for reading,commenting and voting, I must admit that this was my first attempt at writing poetry, thanks soo much for all your responses x  
redhots redhots Mar 18, 2011
first time i read a poem that rhyms and actually sounds good and sad at the same time....good job 
trishthewriter trishthewriter Mar 18, 2011
I have to be honest, I'm not a fan of rhyming poetry, but your imagery is good. Voted. 
TKAnez TKAnez Mar 18, 2011
I really like this poem! It's very unique and well written. I feel like it could even be a song :) I voted~