DarkWing (Final Editing in Progress)

DarkWing (Final Editing in Progress)

29 Part Story 7.1K Reads 332 Votes
Carter Brooke By Retrac752 Completed

In the year 2092, genetic mutation has cured cancer, but with this new field of research comes a new threat, one the public is blind to. Battling a world controlled by fear, a genius driven by greed, and a species shattered by treachery, one man sees the truth and struggles to end the corruption seething from one of the world's largest corporations. The world as we know it ceases to exist, and he is the only one strong enough to face those that destroyed it. As the lines between man and monster blur, who's to say who the real enemy is.

JesseSprague JesseSprague Apr 20, 2016 01:20AM
Very well-written stage setting here. Definitely engaging and where the voice of the narrator comes through it has a lot of personality.
Heatherlea77 Heatherlea77 Sep 05, 2015 04:05PM
Though it is a bit "telling" I LOVE IT... It captured my attention and is the type of reading that makes you think, even in fiction. I ALWAYS love to find good stories like this. Excited to read more!
BaconToby BaconToby Feb 11, 2015 12:13AM
wow this is an amazing story! haha and now is when I find this story?Where has this amazing story been my whole life.I love it so much so far !
MadamMoira MadamMoira Oct 23, 2012 02:08PM
It has this obvious field of science feeling to it, and I kind of liked it - but since some of your paragraphs looked long, it kinda seemed taunting a bit. It's an interesting prologue. Keep up the good work! -voted
very interesting chapter so far
                                    good science stuff and virtually no grammar mistakes
gabrielam1678 gabrielam1678 Aug 25, 2012 11:11PM
Wow that was great! You did amazing with description. It makes the story feel so real! Great job! :D