DarkWing (Final Editing in Progress)

29 Part Story 6.4K Reads 329 Votes
Carter Brooke By Retrac752 Completed
In the year 2092, genetic mutation has cured cancer, but with this new field of research comes a new threat, one the public is blind to. Battling a world controlled by fear, a genius driven by greed, and a species shattered by treachery, one man sees the truth and struggles to end the corruption seething from one of the world's largest corporations. The world as we know it ceases to exist, and he is the only one strong enough to face those that destroyed it. As the lines between man and monster blur, who's to say who the real enemy is.
wow this is an amazing story! haha and now is when I find this story?Where has this amazing story been my whole life.I love it so much so far !
It's so hard to get all those errors corrected! But they're easy fixes. Glad it helped! :) @Retrac752
It has this obvious field of science feeling to it, and I kind of liked it - but since some of your paragraphs looked long, it kinda seemed taunting a bit. It's an interesting prologue. Keep up the good work! -voted
very interesting chapter so far
                                    good science stuff and virtually no grammar mistakes
Wow that was great! You did amazing with description. It makes the story feel so real! Great job! :D
Now, I'm a total idiot and I am the WORST with the science stuff. But this was really good. Well what I understood was really good. It was well written and there were hardly any grammatical errors. Well done :)