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The Lost Princess

The Lost Princess

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hail162 By hail162 Updated Nov 09, 2014

The kingdom of Trion has been in a depressed state since their beloved Queen died due to complications during her twins birth. But what saddened them even more was the disappearance of their Princess Stutton, shortly after she was born. For the last sixteen years the country has had many searches but always come up empty.  Olivia Cooper is an orphan who was left on the stairs of a Hawaiian Orphanage as a baby.  Being one of the top students in her grade, she got an all expense paid trip to Trion. As she get's there, she and the kingdom notice an almost identical resemblance to the Queen.  Can Olivia really be the long lost princess? And if she is can she, a down-to-Earth girl, deal with all these snobby, stuck-up girls.  With an evil stepmother who hates Liv on the spot, and a annoying, spoiled stepsister, this is turning more into Cinderella's life then Liv's.

I would just review and edit it if I were you. Few minor spelling mistakes and concord errors. Otherwise it's good.😉
AdrianaGuzman6 AdrianaGuzman6 Jun 01, 2016
Love it u should make a another one,😉😍😘😇😀😁😄😆😉😉
PikkieV PikkieV Jan 02
I think it should be 'expressions on their faces' not 'expressions one their faces'
PikkieV PikkieV Jan 02
Hi, I think it should be 'who locked himself upstairs in his room.', instead of 'who looked himself upstairs in his room.'
MissingtheOldMe MissingtheOldMe Aug 03, 2014
It's a brilliant idea. The grammar just needs a bit of touching up. I love it, though. :)