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You left me!

You left me!

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Muneerah By mademoiselleMoon4 Completed

Fiona got her heart broken just before she finished high school and to make matters worse, her boy friend, Edward broke up with her a day after she lost her virginity to him and a day before Easter. He vanished and no one knew where he was. Her parents never liked him because he's from a poor home and yet Fiona risked everything just to be with him. He was taken for a ragga-muffin in school and nobody liked him. The last person Fiona is expecting is him but he showed up. He was her first love, will she take him back? why did Edward leave in the first place? where did he go? Read to find out........

Jewellz_Writing Jewellz_Writing Jul 17, 2014
I just spent two hours looking for this! Just so I could reread it and add it to my "What I've Read" reading list! I've read it once before and loved it! SOO happy I found it again!
petepete petepete Jan 18, 2013
Haha thanks guys.......200 laps are you serious! I have enough trouble walking to my car.
mademoiselleMoon4 mademoiselleMoon4 Jan 12, 2012
@Jellycc , Yeah...that's about the laps I go too, Just trying to make it subtle for Fiona. I swim for my state in Nigeria. So we got a swimmers fan club here? Thanks for reading.
Jellycc Jellycc Jan 09, 2012
Good so far except for the 50 laps a day I'm a middle school swimmer and we do 200 hundred laps in 2 hours
ellsiebrooks ellsiebrooks Aug 31, 2011
I am interested in the boy. Were did he go and why did he break up with her... reading on.
mademoiselleMoon4 mademoiselleMoon4 Mar 20, 2011
@LianaSellitto , I've read your story and it's awesome. thanks for reading mine too.