Paladin's Eleven (Previously 11)

Paladin's Eleven (Previously 11)

9 Part Story 6.2K Reads 408 Votes
Girl By Abbzygail Updated Sep 04, 2012

Every three hundred years, eleven very special children are born. It is there duty to protect all of the worlds and maintain order. Everything was perfect, until this year, when they are all taken at birth and trained to destroy the world.
    
    Rated PG-13 for violence and language

Nice opening. Really sets up things nicely and gives the reader something to look forward to. What's going on? How are these people? Why are a lot of them going to die? Many reasons to keep reading.
Ducky101XOXO Ducky101XOXO Sep 23, 2012 06:15PM
Really good start. Really interesting. I loved the end sentance.
Oh!  This seems really good!  A very different idea from the usual!  Voted!  ;-)
HelloKeyy HelloKeyy Sep 23, 2012 04:49PM
okay, one, LOVED THE DESCRIPTION! IT'S REALLYYYYY UNIQUE! I LOVE ACTION STORIES! HAHA :)
makexbelieve makexbelieve Sep 23, 2012 04:00PM
Exciting opening. I like the idea and I definitely want to read on.
kiarahanna kiarahanna Sep 23, 2012 01:30AM
Nice beginning! Ahh I'm in love with your story. Original story idea; I can't stop reading!