Beautiful Like You

Beautiful Like You

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Rachel By Racheljane Updated Mar 18, 2011

Ashley isn't exactly what every man wants. In fact, she's far from it. But when she meets a deviant looking to lighten up her life she is in no position to deny him. Through the summer it takes a lot, but her life does indeed change. But is it for the better?

Racheljane Racheljane Mar 18, 2011
@thelionftw I'm not exactly amazing, but I'll keep that in mind. I try and catch all the mistakes I can but I do tend to miss some.
                              Thank you for reading! I'll make sure to take in what you said when I have time to edit.
thelionftw thelionftw Mar 18, 2011
It's a good start, but space out your paragraphs. It's hard to read if everything is smashed together haha. But other than that, this sounds like an interesting story. There's also some grammar mistakes, but not a lot.
                              Can't wait till there's more!