Vanessa Ortiz is about to face the biggest challenge in her life, loosing her father the only person who always loved her and taken care of her.
came to try and get a better idea of your writing style, and it's nice, has a nice steady flow to it, and the emotion gets portrayed very well
I look forward to workign with you
@writerbird Thanks dude. Well is for the reader to imagine what will of happen later on, but the idea is she inherited her fathers disease and will end up dying later on in life.
Hey man I read yr book. It was great! I like ur writing style. I didn't quite get the end tho. Dud she inherit the deseas or was she just imagining and wishing? Anywho it wad good. I'll try and read more of ur stuff!
This is really good. It was very sad her father died but it was nicely done.
@UnrealOne Thank You! I know I tend to write my stories on third person point of view and first, my professors says is ok just to make sure to be specific on what perspective I'm writing from.
This was very good. I could spot a few mistakes, such as you went to the 'She' perspective and then to 'I.'
But overall, it was good, and pretty darn sad. I enjoyed reading it.