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From Reality to Fantasy

From Reality to Fantasy

1.2K Reads 11 Votes 1 Part Story
calvin2 By calvin2 Completed

Vanessa Ortiz is about to face the biggest challenge in her life, loosing her father the only person who always loved her and taken care of her.

momamoose momamoose Jul 24, 2011
came to try and get a better idea of your writing style, and it's nice, has a nice steady flow to it, and the emotion gets portrayed very well
                              I look forward to workign with you
calvin2 calvin2 Apr 27, 2011
@writerbird Thanks dude. Well is for the reader to imagine what will of happen later on, but the idea is she inherited her fathers disease and will end up dying later on in life. 
writerbird writerbird Apr 27, 2011
Hey man I read yr book. It was great! I like ur writing style. I didn't quite get the end tho. Dud she inherit the deseas or was she just imagining and wishing? Anywho it wad good. I'll try and read more of ur stuff!
- - Apr 01, 2011
This is really good. It was very sad her father died but it was nicely done. 
calvin2 calvin2 Mar 26, 2011
@UnrealOne Thank You! I know I tend to write my stories on third person point of view and first, my professors says is ok just to make sure to be specific on what perspective I'm writing from. 
Stephie-Anne Stephie-Anne Mar 26, 2011
This was very good. I could spot a few mistakes, such as you went to the 'She' perspective and then to 'I.'
                              
                              But overall, it was good, and pretty darn sad. I enjoyed reading it.