Switch It On!

Switch It On!

3.1K Reads 30 Votes 23 Part Story
Cellinda By Cellinda Updated Apr 23, 2011

A broken past has given Chantelle Marjour to much than she could take. It was onesided love and mostly critics that broke her down. Moving into the city, why not try to change? But not as expected, she got 3 different personality and has now the perfect life, as a pretty blond in school, the smart sophisticated girl in front of her parents, and lastly - herself. Only when she's alone.
But how can she manage to keep up when a piece of your past returns? And that's not any piece, it's her first love - the onesided love. Also, it seems like he has the ability to bring out her real self.

Cellinda Cellinda Mar 23, 2011
@Anni_innA Thank you for liking it! Haha, I really should get an editor. I'll contact a buddy that can help me :) Also, if u need an excuse to why I have so many wrong spelled of anything that's likely because english isn't my best language i guess :s
Anni_innA Anni_innA Mar 23, 2011
i hope you can have an editor to check your spelling because there's more in this chapter than the first one. but i still like your story 
Anni_innA Anni_innA Mar 23, 2011
i really like it :) you have a few spelling mistakes though. keep writing!
Robyns_imagination Robyns_imagination Mar 22, 2011
hi, at first i din't get the beggining was flash back but it was good. you should use ittalics as mentioned before, and not overload your sentances with too many discriptive words. 
                              Apart from that, I actually enjoyed your story and you should keep writitng :D