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Warrior's Slave

Warrior's Slave

148K Reads 5.4K Votes 16 Part Story
Baddie By BadRose12 Updated Sep 18, 2016

Book One of Historical Love series:
"You are my slave from now on female. You will do as I say and will not speak unless spoken to. If you disrespect me I will punish you. I will not remind you again, understand?" Marcell's body shook with fear as she starred into the eyes of the Roman beast. Julian Costello. The greatest Roman warrior to walk the Earth. Some Romans say he's the son of the war god Mars. She's heard many Greeks talk about how he brutally took the lives of many Greeks, showing no mercy, and now she was at his mercy, forced to do as he pleases or face punishment. 

   Will Marcell be able to fight off new desires that emerge from deep inside her. Will Marcell be able to escape Julian? Will she be able to make it back to Greece? Or will the merciless beast loose interest and kill her?

princesaKD princesaKD May 12, 2016
Not to be rude & not sure if you reread and edited yet but you forgot to put "ran out 'of' her room" and it's stared not starred. Just wanted to let u know! Sorry don't mean to critique it just letting you know ! Love this by the way! There's not many good historical fiction stories!
Crystal_George Crystal_George Sep 08, 2016
Other than little grammar errors this looks very well written.
dilucas4444 dilucas4444 Oct 07, 2015
Lol, I thought it said vanilla instead of villa, and I was like, "What?".
96hekiv 96hekiv Sep 09, 2015
Wow. Things are getting interesting. Btw, It's spelled Zeus. NOT Zues.
missbookwormmmmm missbookwormmmmm Aug 26, 2015
An author who does research before they write, especially historical, fiction deserve a star.
                              Interesting first chapter! :)
nyre2m nyre2m Aug 06, 2015
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