Left to be raped

Left to be raped

1.1M Reads 21.1K Votes 30 Part Story
Giovana Goytia By giovi_byg21 Completed

Rose is on a date with her boyfriend Max. They had a wonderful time celebrating her 20th birthday, but as soon as she is alone she is attacked and raped. He leaves a mark on her neck reminding her she will always be his. Just as she thinks she will die, Kyle a friend of hers comes to the rescue. She has survived but she remembers his voice. what happens when his voice is familiar to her? Join Rose on this twisted and unimaginable journey to discover her attacker.

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  • annie
  • caught
  • defeat
  • didnt
  • feel
  • giovanagoytia
  • halloween
  • hopeless
  • kyle
  • mike
  • right
  • something
  • warehouse
BleddingXLullaby BleddingXLullaby Oct 26, 2017
You rushed the story. No description of surrondings or people. You dont even explain how she feels. Just, "rape her and leave." Rushed stories arnt all that good. You want the reader to feel what the charrecter feals.
_areumdaum _areumdaum Nov 30, 2016
I love this so much, it started so strong and fierce! UUGHHH!
WessaMalecClaceSizzy WessaMalecClaceSizzy May 24, 2016
Am I the only one to think it was Max? But I suppose that she would recognize the voice. And thx for Kyle.
rosepetaels rosepetaels Sep 02, 2016
I'm literally imagining that guy in a hood from the music video called Faded for some reason
Roxy4268x Roxy4268x Nov 06, 2016
Is it just me or does anyone else get reminded of American Horror story (coven) where butler has a load of baby dolls..No just me.. okay XD
Cruelish98 Cruelish98 Mar 27, 2016
I think everything happened too fast... But its  an amazing history.