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Beyond His beauty & his Charm (On Hold/ Hiatus)

Beyond His beauty & his Charm (On Hold/ Hiatus)

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Kezza By ScriptStories13 Updated Apr 01

Karla is just a normal 22 year old girl making a living in NYC . While trying to succeed in getting a her diploma in Directing at NYU she is also juggling work as an intern at The New Yorker. Her boss leon is a jerk whos arrogant and cocky to say the least, she hates him eventhough hes drop dead gorgeous and  i mean that lyterally . Everything about her life was normal until one night out  on the town that's where everything turned ... weird. She saw another side to the Boss she knew for 7 months and now shes finding theres more to him than meets the eye. 

like they say Every Rose Has its Thorn,  in other words Even beauty   has its hidden flaw.  his is just bigger than most! :)

hannahbear911 hannahbear911 Jul 23, 2013
I can't see Leon as Logan Lerman....maybe Chris Hemsworth but it's your story & it's really good!!
ScriptStories13 ScriptStories13 Jul 16, 2012
@marisambp  exactly why I'm editing this book . Its almost a good a year and a half old  ive learnt alot since i started this. Thnx for the Constructive criticism though . I am aiming to improve!
marisambp marisambp Jul 15, 2012
This will sound harsh because I'm not really sure of another way to say it. Can you not write like a three year old? It's all sloppy and not capitalized. It really decreases the value of this otherwise, very good story.
ScriptStories13 ScriptStories13 May 04, 2012
@koko101   It was a typo I didnt even notice till now haha sorry I'll fix that ... I originally made it a black BMW but changed it.
Receptionist Receptionist Mar 17, 2011
I LOVE THIS!!! Please carry on, can't wait for the next bit.  x