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Abbey Rule

Abbey Rule

677 Reads 11 Votes 6 Part Story
Maeve ;) By mavis56 Updated Sep 13, 2011

What do you get when you cross a sheltered town of sweethearts with a manipulative bitch? Marigold County is a tiny town that prides themselves on the general good behaviour of its residents. Enter Abigail Jackson. Abbey’s a completely different breed and she’s determined to shake things up. She’s making her own rules and her own enemies. The town’s queen bee, Madeline Fairchild, had better watch her back. Abbey’s hell bent on tearing her world down brick by brick. But why? Abbey's got her secrets and her motives. Careful ladies, this is Abbey’s rule.

goaliegirl47 goaliegirl47 Jun 27, 2011
you characters are so well developed I feel like I know them personally!  Great job!
goaliegirl47 goaliegirl47 Jun 27, 2011
Great casting!  Lucy Hale is perfect for Abbey and Sara Paxton for Madeline! I love putting their faces with the character I am reading!
mavis56 mavis56 Mar 23, 2011
@chaterboxxx hey, thanks so much.
                              Yeah this is the first one i've done with different POV's but they're kidn on necessary for the story later. You'll see :)
                              thanks again :)
mavis56 mavis56 Mar 18, 2011
@Kaylah135 thanks, i'm working on chapter 3 now it should be up by today or tomorrow :)
TKAnez TKAnez Mar 18, 2011
This is a really good start! You establish the tone very well. Your biggest strength is describing your characters, especially Abbey. Keep it up :) Voted~