A Heart for Copper

A Heart for Copper

18.9K Reads 305 Votes 3 Part Story
Sharon Lynn Fisher By SharonLynnFisher Completed

An automaton created by an inventor's son, Copper has finally been given a heart by her young master. Her choice of whether to keep the key or give it to him will decide her fate in this steampunk "pick your path" adventure.

Rosie_Spells Rosie_Spells Apr 30, 2016
Beautiful starting lines. As a fan of poetry, I can't help but admire the beauty of complex made simple.
CharlesFlynn CharlesFlynn Dec 16, 2016
Rosie_Spells is correct - poetry, but poetry in motion! Chilling, haunting point of view as well.
HJaneMay HJaneMay Feb 24, 2016
This is awesome! I'm writing a Choose Your Own Adventure story too and I'm psyched that there's another one out there!
MegMerriet MegMerriet May 22, 2016
The opening is so mesmerizing. I love the elegant prose, the descriptions of materials intermingled with emotions that are so human and yet almost cryptic. Copper is a beautiful (not to mention very original) name for an automaton.
01anonymous01 01anonymous01 Jun 09, 2015
I believe this will be a great story. I'm already hooked! (Haha no puns intended.) ^^  I love the rhyming. :)
Silver-Spark Silver-Spark Jul 12, 2014
I love this! I saw it was a steampunk fairytale and this is much better than what I expected.