Avengers and Percy

Avengers and Percy

54.8K Reads 1.5K Votes 9 Part Story
LeoAndCalypso By LeoAndCalypso Completed

ummm...Avengers? and ummm...Percy Jackson crossover?... maybe?

tigergirl942 tigergirl942 Jul 23, 2017
I kind of take a deep breath at the beginning of each paragraph and read all of it in a full sentence.
IfYouDieWalkItOff616 IfYouDieWalkItOff616 May 25, 2017
that pic though! LOL. I can totally see Percy, sorry i mean Persassy, doing this to Rachel
thebestorangecarrot thebestorangecarrot Oct 04, 2017
any name with "smith" for the first or last name is sketchy guaranteed
Might I suggest something called punctuation? This is really hard to read, and I bet this story would gain more notice if you used proper grammar.
JJ_Feraday JJ_Feraday Jun 03, 2016
Uhhh, is the whole thing a big runon? Try fixing any grammatical mistakes before u publish. It turns out better. Good plot though.
Ella1661 Ella1661 Feb 03, 2017
That is the longest sentence I have ever seen in all my life