A Pinch of Memories in my Bowl of Disaster

A Pinch of Memories in my Bowl of Disaster

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Puti By MarvelouslyWICKED Updated Aug 07, 2012

"Who are you?!" I yelled, sitting in the water. As I looked up at the man, he seemed so august and overpowering. His armor gleamed in the sunlight. The man hollered back at me, "You don't need to know who I am! If you don't get up and follow my orders, I'll kill you!"  Meet Daniela Carson. She lives in a relatively small town and lives a relatively normal life. So of course, when she meets a boy named Ayden, all that changes. She falls for him, but when he disappears, she is kidnapped. While being captive on an island, she discovers secrets. She soon learns that her memory, or lack of it, is the only thing keeping her alive. Is that enough to escape?  The less you know, the better... 'aint that the truth!!!  This story involves: Love Betrayal Survival Suspense NO WEREVOLVES OR VAMPIRES :)

  • adventure
  • daniela
  • daredevil
  • fiction
  • love
  • magic
  • mystery
  • teen
belle6692 belle6692 May 12, 2013
STEPH!!!!!!! I started reading like a few months ago but didn't get to finish because of homework and forgot where I left off
monaalove monaalove Dec 28, 2012
This so AMAZING! It was one of the most creative and original ideas i have ever read ! Once again i appreciate your fanning. Pleas if you get the time you can check out my book
MarvelouslyWICKED MarvelouslyWICKED Sep 23, 2012
@ForeverMalak lol that's random but who cares because i love Annie <3 thanks!
Swag_on_You_123 Swag_on_You_123 Sep 16, 2012
Awwww so sweet lol !!! I did understand your writing !! Yayyyy ^_^
Veronique Veronique Aug 15, 2012
Thanks for the dedication! I like the Daniela girl, a true daredevil! :) And there is a lot of mystery in that boy too. I don't trust him.
MarvelouslyWICKED MarvelouslyWICKED Aug 14, 2012
@JustaGirlinthisWorld ok thanks! I'll probably be proofreading soon :)