Poem written about my  childhood sweetheart,i have held alot back on this as it was a 32 line competition,soon i will put the whole thing up,if you would like that of course....
Wow....very well written. Very good. 
                                    And what shocks me is I have no criticism...none..that rarely ever happens  *claps* 
                                    Well done. But we shall see what lies ahead with the next poem I will read.
Beautiful, lovely and incredibly written.  Loved your descriptions and how it read like a story.  Well, well done.
This is a really lovely poem I really liked the last stanza :)
Excellent!  Tells the story, and a nice ryhme.  If this was longer once, then yes, tell it whole.  Voted.