Finding The Truth (Unedited)

Finding The Truth (Unedited)

40.9K Reads 2K Votes 33 Part Story
Brielle Angel By bri1128 Completed

After her parent's unexplained death, Emma is forced into foster care, only to be adopted by a mysterious family. Upon arriving at their house, she begins to feel a strange and eerie vibe. After hearing voices and seeing ghosts, she starts to question her new family while trying to figure out what happened to her parents. While doing so, she will find out things about herself and her parents's life before her that she thought could never be true. But what if doing so puts her life at risk?

(cover by @maximoff-)
(trailer by @valuables)

I think its a good start,kinda weird though!as for mistakes guys it does say unedited!!!!!
fR05tyB3ast fR05tyB3ast Jan 16
Is Haley's mom also named Elizabeth? I'm curious and a bit confused because she's Grace for most of this chapter.
TheDarkHasRisen TheDarkHasRisen Dec 09, 2015
Voted. Good start, well detailed and emontional, will definitely keep reading.
zeemalik10004 zeemalik10004 May 25, 2015
Its my first chap and tbh, it has a pull. A few mistakes here and there but hey I'm going on further.
foundmymate foundmymate May 22, 2015
I like what I have read yet... Perhaps you could make it more emotional... I don't feel her pain and I am very emotional person. Anyway reading on..
malefic- malefic- Apr 17, 2015
It's a good start. But that said, it just didn't capture my interest the way a really good first chapter does.