My Twin Mate's

My Twin Mate's

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Riley By Riley_1D Updated Jun 23, 2015

Penelope Is The Daughter Of The Alpha And With Her Being The Oldest Of All Her Sisters She Has To Find Her Mate So That He Can Clam The Alpha Title But When She Find Him Or Should I Say Them What Does She Do

Can you please don't put a big letter on every single word it's driving me crazy
SkaterGirl37 SkaterGirl37 May 24, 2016
Gabrielle is my name..........
                              And I'm the description above.......
SkaterGirl37 SkaterGirl37 May 24, 2016
Why is every word captiolized, it makes me feel like you are talking fast.
lovlylisa12 lovlylisa12 Mar 27, 2016
U love the character you chose she has amazing hair and eyes
Ash_E_Lynn Ash_E_Lynn Mar 16, 2015
One word. Mechanics. This covers the topic of punctuation (which you don't have) and capitalization (which there is too much of).
buttermypopcorn buttermypopcorn Jan 07, 2015
don't take this the wrong way, but do you know wut  periods are?