This is not a love story. it's a story about a guy and a girl, a misunderstanding, the campus of a beautiful university, quirky friends, loneliness, arguments about tea versus coffee and one ripped jacket. And maybe some love.
its quite good on the grammer part ....interesting concept,loved it :)
I like how no two characters are the same. I believe the story would get more qouta's if you added more descriptions other than that you don't ahve to many errors and didn't go overboard on the chit chat... just add more description. Keep it up!
@heywot i understand. :) going from novel to plays to novel again...it can be disorienting. You did a good job though! Your characterizations are good. :)