Confident of Betrayal

Confident of Betrayal

598 Reads 10 Votes 9 Part Story
Taylor By ItsTaeToYou Updated Apr 28, 2011

Riley Ophelia Hart, 15 years old, year 10 in Upton Secondary. But this girl has more than just exams to be worrying about, with the loss of her mother, her abusive father and 3 years of bullying scarring her concience. Her life is finely balanced...
Declan Chapman, 16 years old, year 11 in Upton Secondary. Having given him everything he ever wanted, Declan's parents creating the arrogant young boy that bullied Riley from year 5-8. Has he changed? An can he prove this to Riley before the balance tips and pushes her over the edge...

arose13 arose13 Mar 22, 2011
good descriptions! i loved the chapter and learning about her best friend. im glad that it won't all be so depressing ;) lol, voted!
arose13 arose13 Mar 22, 2011
oh and ill think about possible titles. your writing is really good and realistic, i can picture what is happening almost perfectly! i haven't read any other chapters so maybe you do this later on, but maybe you want to describe more what they look like?? its up to you! great start!
arose13 arose13 Mar 22, 2011
omg that was so intense! goodness, poor girl. i HATE her father, he's absoflutely horrible ;) lol can't wait to see what happens, its a great plot line!!