Music and Heart Beats

Music and Heart Beats

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Marissa By roxxygirl22 Updated Dec 17, 2014

What happens when two ruined lives are in love? When one finds the need to suppress it to keep the one they care for safe? Melody is a Musically talented loner-emo who befriends two new kids and develop feeling for one of them.The new kid feels the same for Melody but is afraid his life with put her at risk. Will he be able to fight off his love for her?

roxxygirl22 roxxygirl22 Jul 06, 2011
Yeah sometimes I feel like that bout a guyXD one minuet he's a douche,the next hot,the next sweet ,and the next I'm confused to the point of "wtf" haha lols and guys say WERE confusing X)
Kay-KAylalala Kay-KAylalala Jul 06, 2011
@roxxygirl22 I miss you too! Its still very good, dont get me wrong its just...odd lol but thats teens for ya
roxxygirl22 roxxygirl22 Jul 06, 2011
@Kay-KAylalala Yeah well not to be mean or anything but that's what I kinda intended to do like showing the confusing life of a teenager with mixed emotions and It is hard to hide the little voice in the back of your head that won't deny your connection lols and I miss u miikayla!!!!!'
Kay-KAylalala Kay-KAylalala Jul 06, 2011
@WelaraJumper I agree. Its kinda rushed, anf the grammar is not the best. I think that if you're going to have them trying to NOT like each other, they shouldnt be like "oh i might give her a chance"..gotta give it more of a struggle you know? but overall, very good! xD
                              
Kay-KAylalala Kay-KAylalala Jul 06, 2011
Sounds interesting enough....ill look forward to seeing more
                              
roxxygirl22 roxxygirl22 Jun 27, 2011
@baybay I got an editor so now all my chapters have correct grammar and the paragraphs are spaced out.thx again for your advice