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you rejected me so I'm moving on

you rejected me so I'm moving on

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kitty23457 By kitty23457 Completed

"Your weak and I can't have a weak mate so I reject you"he spoke. Sammatha had been waiting for the day she found her mate but when she did it didn't goes as planed. Her Foster dad beats her and her two friends only knows. With his rejection she wanted to die but Lizzy, her friend,  cousin comes to visits he turns her world around. Her heart began to piece together as she gets close to Dean but Sean, her mate that rejected her, finds out and gets mad. Thanks to Dean, Sammatha learns to stand on her feet to accept his rejection.  Can Dean also save her from her other problem or will her Foster dad kill her before she learns to love again?

brittneyb3066 brittneyb3066 Feb 20, 2016
Plz add a line in between the paragraphs thx it just makes it harder to read
It's good but, it needs more stanzas, especially where the dialogue is, and maybe add more details please, not to sound harsh
StrawberryLover_27 StrawberryLover_27 Jan 07, 2015
So I am kind of interested in this book because of the title and now I am going to read this book. I love it!!!
oreogirl14 oreogirl14 Jul 23, 2014
would he feels shes in danger or feel her pain because he's her mate?
kitty23457 kitty23457 Jan 12, 2013
@heyitsalice thanks for your review im kinda of a beginner in writting but i will deffenly try and fix them up the best i can. Thanks alot
kitty23457 kitty23457 Nov 03, 2012
@cheekychick008 Sean who is mention later in the story is her real Mate but he rejects her because he thinks she weak